一、写作三步走
1. 自我介绍,说明写信目的
2. 委婉地提出建议及改进措施或忠告
3. 希望采纳建议,并表示感谢或期盼回复。
二、写作素材集锦
1、常用词汇
feedback n.反馈 feasible adj.可行的 suggestion n.建议 proposal n.建议
venture v.冒昧做某事 beneficial adj. 有益的 advise v. 建议 suggest v. 建议
recommend v. 推荐,劝告 wise adj. 明智的
2、常用表达句
首段:
1) You have consulted me for some advice about how to improve..., so I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
针对你向我咨询的如何提高...的问题,我会尽量给出有建设性的建议。
2) I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of...so as to...
针对过进一步提高...以求...的问题,我想提一下自己的看法。
3) I would like to make a recommendation that...
我想建议您...
中间段:
1) I’d like to suggest that...
我建议...
2) May I suggest that...?
我能否建议...
3) From my perspective, ...
以我之见, ...
4) If you can make a careful study…, I am convinced that your skills of …will be greatly improved.
如果你能认真学习…,我相信你的…能力将极大提高。
5) I feel that it would be beneficial if ….
我认为如果…,将会收益。
尾段:
1) Thank you for your attention.
感谢您的关注。
2) I believe you will take my suggestion into consideration.
我相信你一定会考虑我的建议的。
3)I sincerely hope that my proposals would be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.
衷心希望您能考虑我的建议,并在这些方面进行积极的改变。
4)I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations helpful/useful.
我希望这些建议能对您有所帮助。
5)I am looking forward to your reply.
期待你的回复。
3、黄金模板
Dear ,
As , I am writing this letter to express my views concerning . Although , there is still much room for improvement.
From my point of view, I would like to make the following suggestions. First, . second, . Besides, . Consequently, I believe that .
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
Yours sincerely,